Blazingfur - FireClan

[Blazingfur]

Name: Blazingfur

Gender: tom (male)

Age: 36 moons

Clan: FireClan

Appearance:

he also has a dark tail tip and a white spot on the left hind foot

Personality: he is very loyal to his clan and will do whatever it takes to defend it. his fiery personality makes him a cat to be feared in a fight. as a friend, he is kind and loving. when it is necessary to make decisions, he is a fair and just judge.

History: blazingfur was born into fireclan under the name of littlekit. he was the smallest of the litter and no one thought he would do much good in battle. he grew up in the clan and was mentored by none other than the clan leader. when he became a warrior, the clan leader decided to change his name to blazingfur, because he had proved to be an essential part of the clan. his fighting skills were some of the best in the clan and he had an uncanny ability to sense where the next attack was coming from. blazingfur has served his clan proudly since being made warrior, including help to drive out a badger attack.

Other: blazingfur is requesting to become fireclan leader, or deputy if the positions are still open. he would lead his clan well.

[katt123]

Name: Bloodspill
Gender: she-cat
Clan: DarkClan
Position: Requesting to be leader, deputy, or Med.cat
Peltage: Bloodspill has been in many battles, and the pinkish scars standing out on her midnight-black pelt are plenty proof. She has a scar over one eye, making that eye gray, cloudy-looking, and blind. She also has a scar right across the bridge of her nose. Her pelt is as dark a black as black can be, and she has icy blue eyes that would stop Tigerstar in his tracks.
Personality: She is very dark and forebodeing, and when she is not sleeping, she is usually out in the forest. She doesn't stay around camp as much as another cat, but she has proven herself worhty of Clan membership.
History: Bloodspill came from BloodClan a long time ago, she escaped from the battle with the clans of the forest and no one had seen her since until she came into DarkClan.
IC: Bloodspill was walking through the forest, her ears pricked for the sounds of prey. She heard a mouse scuttling in the leaves, and instantly dropped into the hunting crouch. She pounced on the mouse and killed it, thanking StarClan for its life, and headed towards her store of prey she had caught earlier, ready to bring it to the DarkClan camp.

[birchstar]

Name: Birchstripe

Gender: She-Cat

Clan: Sparkclan

Position: Warrior

Peltage: Birchstripe is a large, with a thin light brown coat with darker spots of brown. She has long legs so she is a very fast runner and is one of the fastest in the forest. She is what some people (or cats) would call ugly because of the number of scares she has, which include one on her mussle, left hind leg and on her belly.

Picture: www.dkimages.com/discover/previews/870/10005606.JPG

Personality: Birchstripe is a genrally good natured cat but can be rather distant when she sees kits. She is quite resorsfull and always tries to get the best out of a situation, that is why I think she would be a good leader. Her favourite things to do in the forest is to go for a swim in the river and to stretch out in a secret clearing of only she knows and act like a kit e.g. rolling on the floor and chasing the leaves(it helps her to not get stressed with all her leader duties). Her lease favourite things are having to go into battle because she thinks that it is wrong that clans must fight each other and having to give speaches to her clan because secretly she is quite shy and does not like the way that the other clan members must protect her, she thinks that she can look after herself and anyway she has 9 lives.

History: Birchkit was one of the roudyest of the litter to Lillyflame and inherited her mother’s markings and personality and nothing of her father (Icefur) ways apart from loving the water. Icefur was a Waterclan cat and he and Lillyflame met by the moonlit waterfall and Lillyflame had kits. Lillyflame had to pretend that she did not know who was the farther and Birchkit didn’t know ither until she walked in on Lillyflame telling her friend Dawnflower about having wished that she’d never met Icefur. After 6 moons Birchkit and her brothers and sisters, Willowkit, Sunkit, and Ashkit were made into apprentices( Birchpaw, Willowpaw, Sunpaw and Ashpaw). Birchpaw’s brothers and sisters trained hard with their mentors but Birchpaw’s unwillingness to behave and listen to her mentor (Hollystripe) caused much concern in Fireclan but 5 moons after her siblings she became a warrior and earned the name Birchstripe. 2 moons later tragedy struck, during a flood Birchstripe’s siblings were out hunting when by the river but the force of a wave swept them away. To add to her misery in leaf-bare Birchstrip’s new born kits Nightkit and Sandkit died of Whitecought and she was devastated. Thought through this turmoil Birchstripe became deputy and now that Dimondstar has lost her 9th life she is ready to become a leader.

IC: As Birchstipe watched the sparrow about 2 feet away she heard a rustling in the bushes. Straining her ears she could hear the slow deep breathing of a large tiered animal and the higher breathing of something smaller and weaker. Hoping it was nothing dangerous she leapt into the bushes and waited and slowly, very slowly the creature edged into the light and she saw it was a badger with 2 young. The larger badger sniffed around, and Birchstripe thanked Starclan that she was upwind, then lumbered across the clearing and out of site. As soon as it had gone Birchstripe sprang out of the bushes and started running to the Sparkclan camp to warn the Clan of the possible danger of the badger.

[Wildshadow]

Ok, Blazingfur- Good bio, except you need to follow the form. Can you go back and redo it?
Katt123- You need to make another different thread for your bio, and maybe fill it out a little more.
Birchstar- Great bio, andit would be accepted if you hadn't posted it here instead of your own thread. Repost it and I'll look it over again.